Comments by All Members
- "In aw of this. So many great lines and a buttload of viscous imagery. Lovely girl... so lovely. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Quiet Storm" by GraveFlower
- "Oh wow, now I see what all the talk is about, this poem shows the duration of many things ingeneral, a balace between night and day in a sence. Great write GF =)
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Posted by Gray Vision on "Quiet Storm" by GraveFlower
- "To learn from your past, your mistakes, and most of all your old pain is the best that we can do. Many people here at DP can relate to a poem like this."
Posted by Adam on "childhood curse..." by GraveFlower
- "(i cant fight corruption if im a part of it the scars on my knuckles from the teeth of my victims prove this) What insight into your own being. I loved this poem.
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Posted by Leith Plunkett on "tarnishing tears" by GraveFlower
- "We are all pieces of shit, but some smell better than others. Pride can only take us so far but eventually there will be a dead end street and no way to return. This is a good write! ~DC~"
Posted by Unknown on "Only Ash Remains" by GraveFlower
- "I do not envy the thoughts behind this work, as any loss is scarring, but a tragic loss so much more... Warm wishes and hugs to you, darlin'. Hope ya feel 'em and they do some good."
Posted by Sketso on "A Funeral and Birthday Wishes" by GraveFlower
- "ps. yes doll, angels bleed. my tears are are made of blood. and i bleed for the angels, a tarnished angel every moment of this life... seems sad but it is me and somewhere clouded by darkness i am beautiful and happy too. (it always comes back to yin and yang.) :) thanks for this one really nice work. ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "A Funeral and Birthday Wishes" by GraveFlower
- "you are really such a beautiful person inside and out. i see so much of the young me in you. i'm really glad you're here at this site and that i could meet such a talented and promising young soul. this poem holds alot of feeling, and i can't stop coming back and looking at it (i suppose its cuz i was supposed to go to my friends funeral today eek) death is a difficult thing to go thru, but we really have to do, what you just did and celebrate life and the memories that we have. if only we could live forever, and maybe we do, who knows. *important part* but the time we have here and the ways that we touch others hearts and lives is what matters. i'm so glad to have met you ms. danni. keep writing and never stop being you. much love your way. ~ta"
Posted by denver nitze on "A Funeral and Birthday Wishes" by GraveFlower
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