Comments by All Members
- "God.Damn. this is just...fuck. how do i say this...this piece meant something to me. a true masterpiece. Definitely bookmark worthy."
Posted by Twilight on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "such an impressionistic write... if love could be confined to words... defined, refined.... sucked out of the living infinite and forced into symbolic vessels of mind... these words here have tamed the wild passion of le petit mort in visions of vibrant and vibrating veracity... such beauty is a magnanimous and magnetic.... who could not follow such chemistry across the endless star dust sea.... *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "Belle epoque//infinity in our eyes" by slow.burn.star
- "this was sublime; very abstract in moments and yet within those slipstreams of conscious you pulled back into reality only to fold back into rainbows again; creating great prisms of fantastical thoughts and flow; really super-brilliant :)"
Posted by stryder on "Belle epoque//infinity in our eyes" by slow.burn.star
- "this definitely grasps onto the infinite, I see the smallest hint of colors in your lines, maybe even soft played music. I'm not very good at leaving comments so I'll leave it at the fact that this is very well constructed and I love the way you made it seem like words caught out in the infinite space of time. Great work XD"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Belle epoque//infinity in our eyes" by slow.burn.star
- "So much within such a small space - even more nuances in the third reading than I thought possible. You have a way with words, symbols, nostalgic referentials - this piece is a tapestry finely woven. "cobwebs of clouds/coral melody" I could gorge on this ad infinitum."
Posted by Solace on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "so raw.. these shreds and fragments of beauty.. you weave the natural imagery into something glittering and treasured.... there is an underside here that is so passionately tender..."
Posted by Unknown on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "somber, and raw. i never get to see a piece this short from you. trully in this respect, fewer words produce a more powerfull effect that you seem to master"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "I'm so glad you've posted something new. I got such butterflies when I saw, and still... you gave them such an honorable death in this... I want to wither and die within these wastelands you paint, smoldering landscapes that still tremble with petaled longing... such crushing beauty. Lush, vivid... a quietness... and above all, art. "
Posted by Unknown on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "I would love to exist in one of your poems, i think the scenes you create are more epic and full of longing and darkly adventurous romance than any film i have ever seen"
Posted by Anth on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "sublime work, ive missed that feeling your works inspire, im reminded of no wings - (flash to;) your poetry runs through fields with a torn dress and kisses in the rain(flash to;) wonderfully thought out structure that just mesmerises because it is so integral to the feeling your words give, this is a poem to read until it is remembered off by heart, and i will do"
Posted by Anth on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "i must have read this many more times than i'd realised.. it's certainly been a while, but as i was reading this again it literally felt so familiar i could've sworn i'd written it myself if i didn't know better. i hope you realise how beautiful this piece is, i can honestly say i will never forget it."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "The beautiful imagery in this... I can only describe as muted, as if I was seeing this through a fog, or a dream, or as an old film reel... This was lovely and haunting"
Posted by Unknown on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "it stared with words turning into a mini movie that was just epic!! '..bleeding the dream out '..blushing butterflies..'..lace trim..'"
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "You stole breath between each strophe and replaced it with.. empty space. Gave the effect of a crash, a downfall, that becomes more formidable with each weighty word. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "You pulled me into your world and made wander through every line as you wrote it ... 11:11 was that the time or are you plauged by it too .... Write On :)"
Posted by theXkevorkian on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "star girl. it's been too long. this left me with that gaping hole in my chest that only you can open. i needed it."
Posted by Six-Out on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
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