Comments by All Members
- "I sat at the side of a coffin for too long. It takes years before it really sinks in, that they don't come back,,, This is a beautiful crushing piece, I don't think love ever comes without hurt and loss, eventually, always.... Wonderful deep feeling writing. "
Posted by Magdalena on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "Great form of poetry -- very interesting to read. The quality of the poem is, to me, also really great! However, what is grey #87? Just curious."
Posted by bluegypsea on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "Sweet, silkenee, delicate, like having an angel wing cover your face, and then, boom! Choking. The change from loving caresses to murderous caresses, how I enjoyed that. "
Posted by Nimue44 on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "Beautiful.... honestly beautiful... nothing that I could write... this is... amazing... Honestly I love it... It's... perfect (: Keep up the amazing work. You're awesome"
Posted by Unknown on "no.wings" by slow.burn.star
- "I love this... it reminds me of something I just lost forever; or maybe never had. Hope you get your come back. -Lost"
Posted by Unknown on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "I miss you...when was the last time you signed in? Do it today...right now would be awesome, and as soon as you are signed in post a million more times."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "intoxicated #87" by slow.burn.star
- "I like the imagery and the flow, and what a delicious twist at the end that was! * You may want to do a quick proofread/edit, being careful of the your/you're trap. * Was it my imagination only, or were both figures in this dream feminine? Unusual, enjoyable eroticism."
Posted by Scarrzz on "reverie of roses" by slow.burn.star
- "what the... i've been going through your works... very much impressed.. but this... throws me over the edge. you are a favorite now. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "heart/key" by slow.burn.star
- "i reread this like 4 times. to me, its like the other person takes you for granted or doesn't realize what they are casting aside. it was disturbing to get inside of, yet beautiful in its display."
Posted by OLd SouL on "leatherette" by slow.burn.star
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