Comments by All Members
- "Officially stumped, so much detail cindered passions down to ashes of brittle flecked reflection - truly a wicked feast of words of thought - pian and anger, sentient questioning; no resolve, Outstanding."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "My voice" by edenscancer
- ""And I can't surface, anyways...not enough/To escape the nightmares" ...this is stated in stuttered syllable of lovely lines...Excellent. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "goodbye" by edenscancer
- "Stung by this, the brevity and spacing of lines really gives dimension to the language that squeeze out the pores of emotion under your restless skin. Goodbye."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "goodbye" by edenscancer
- "*shivers* this was just incredible and damnable hehe* I need a cold shower* this was just over powering and made you just well... go crazy"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "i really don't know how to respond to all the compliments I'm getting on my work but thank you wonderland, and everyone else whos been commenting on my work :)"
Posted by edenscancer on "cavity search" by edenscancer
- "die-hard throb to this piece.. so violent it shakes the very breath from my lips.. the words alone.. but the rhymes string them together.. makes it all that much intense.. your writes are a real experience."
Posted by Unknown on "cavity search" by edenscancer
- "refreshingly sorrowful... this is outside the realm of typical and thus soothing for its simple originality though deathly sad as loss once again is shown to consume"
Posted by Unknown on "cavity search" by edenscancer
- "reverberating throughout the hollows of empty...such a powerful flow and powerful punch of a feeling that gnaws upon our bones..."
Posted by AniDayz on "refract" by edenscancer
- "I had to read this again after I read your updated profile. It makes more sense now,cuts deeper. My sould weeps bloody tears every time I read this."
Posted by Vicious Pixie on "3am" by edenscancer
- "The flow in this was awsome, the message terrifying yet, to me, held the comfort of release. Interesting read. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "dearly departed" by edenscancer
- "a hollow voice powers this prose.........empty is the feeling you describe............masterful.......well done..................urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "refract" by edenscancer
- ""..and rain is pouring to my heart like dripping demarol..." beautiful. this made me think of that restlessness that occurs between people when the end of a relationship is near, but no one wants to talk about it
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Posted by Vicious Pixie on "phantom" by edenscancer
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