Comments by All Members
- "damn... you may be the new first new person, in a looong time, to enter this society with something worth reading. The rhyme is what makes it. Doc"
Posted by Doc on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie
- "Just one piece of criticism and then I'll shut up. I could be wrong about this but I think you meant "Life" in the first line. Not "Like". Otherwise, this was perfect."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie
- "My god... I'm never - NEVER - this excited about a rhyme/structered poem. But this... This was something special. Beautifuly crafted couplets that just flow. FLOW. and your content was breathtaking. Welcome to DP. With a vengance."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie
- ""And if you insist on killing me with a pitchfork,/I'd rather not die at all." Muahaha, nor would I wish to die that way. This is, as glass said, a beautiful gem. And I, as well, welcome you to DP and hope you stick around. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Cascades and Caskets" by monalisamarie
- "well, this was incredible..the second to last stanza was simply gorgeous, and the end blew me away. this entire poem filled me with emotion..i'm very impressed with this gem. welcome to dp, i hope you stay. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Cascades and Caskets" by monalisamarie
