Comments by All Members
- ""You use a mask of decadence
To hide your fleeting esteem"...once a person has self-reflected, he can now be a "free-spirited lovechild"...beautifully wriiten."
Posted by Unknown on "Domino Effect" by hate_doll
- "Lovely and magical, I saw it all in my mind's eye. I loved the second stanza the best. Captivating work honey. :)"
Posted by Lynaes on "City (e)Scape" by hate_doll
- "Like the double name...and the signs so celebrational...transformed, makes me think of Northern Cal. and the ugly parts of cities there, and longing to return to emerald triangle."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "City (e)Scape" by hate_doll
- "Yes, yes it is ironic. I love this, you sing such truths so clearly. This is very socially minded, and thought provoking. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Isn't it Ironic?" by hate_doll
- "The beauty in this was a product of som\ many well-composed elements. From your ryhme scheme, to your imagery, to your word choice; this all compiled a breath-taking, and mysteriously curious sonnet. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "prisms in your palms (a sonnet)" by hate_doll
- "Ah! I don't think this has recieved nearly as much attention as it deserves. The way you worded this entire piece really roused somthing in my heart that I too can feel some sort of kinship towards. "I am Divine." I agree. This entire thing was divine. .."
Posted by Unknown on "Butterfly Wing Freedom" by hate_doll
- "honestly, i normally dont like sonnets, but i have to admit, this one is much worth the time to read, and you got me looking foward to reading your work now. *stalks you silently* OnceDarkPoet"
Posted by Unknown on "prisms in your palms (a sonnet)" by hate_doll
- "Amazing, just like every thing else you have written and i have read, i am rendered speachless."
Posted by Unknown on "Raging Lethe" by hate_doll
- "an incredible menagerie of flowing images and vivid sensuality, blended together in such a form it leaves a linger dust of colourific fire...intense and serene, simultaneously."
Posted by AniDayz on "prisms in your palms (a sonnet)" by hate_doll
- "*sits down and looks around* I would like to stay here very much I agree with Col its unusual but sensual and beautiful, it was a coil around your heart that tightened. I'm glad I took the time to read your piece, it was heart softening~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "prisms in your palms (a sonnet)" by hate_doll
- "Silly...little...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! NOT AT ALL. I love the contrasted similarities...they come together so well in this write, and you show them for what they are. Good job!"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Isn't it Ironic?" by hate_doll
- "Slow but intense and detailed. I like. The last stanza makes everything better, confusing but clear. It brings about the understanding of what an unwanted goodbye is...and the solidarity it takes to keep it. I like."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "What it Means to Say Goodbye" by hate_doll
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