Comments by All Members
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This has a lyrical feel to it - in part of the repetitious verses - which brings this piece to life in such a beautiful & torrid way ... Your description, heartfelt & genuine ... Devlin.
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Posted by Devil lyn on "No one needs to know" by Angelic Darkness
- "What a dark way of describing love. It is not a wholly positive emotion, but rather a complex and dynamic part of life that can make life worth living or just utterly suck, to be a bit frank. You did a good job of conveying that. The last four lines specifically express the negativity of the situation. It comes a little out of left field and leaves the reader feeling unsettled. I like it! Great job."
Posted by Queazenart on "No one needs to know" by Angelic Darkness
- "It appears, mentally there WAS two people there. But that's probably not good enough :-P
Nice write, if not a bit restless and with poiny things sticking out of it here and there."
Posted by Unknown on "The Thing About Sex" by Angelic Darkness
- "Dear respected Angelic Darkness,
Your rhyme scheme is classic
And number of lines is limited
So reading gives a pleasant kick
Understanding is also permitted
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN"
Posted by mvvenkataraman on "Suicidal Tendencies" by Angelic Darkness
- "Basically I'm saying that Fear isn't something you should have close all the time.
There should be a space between Bed and Friend actually now that I look at it. Hehe.
Plus I think I might have skipped some proper Grammar to keep my flow going. >.>
^.^;
Thanks for the Comment!"
Posted by Angelic Darkness on "Lost, I should have known" by Angelic Darkness
- "This poem had excellent flow and meaning. However, there was one line I did not get "Fear, not a good befriend make" probably just me though. My clumsy hands could not grasp it... I liked your poem all the same :) Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost, I should have known" by Angelic Darkness
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