Comments by All Members
- "Wow I love the opening and ending lines in your last verse... I think is definately something that I can feel too. great write."
Posted by darkdesires on "Save Me" by Crimson Shade
- "The succession of your stanzas fit so perfectly with the risings and settings of the sun. Your imagery is as realistic as a painting. Beautiful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Passage of the Sun" by Crimson Shade
- "Impactful and harmonious, every stanza. You've such an eloquent approach to giving voice to devastation. These words have made a presence of their own. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Aftermath" by Crimson Shade
- "Elegant and timely.. quite the colourful write, in abstract to the dull/lifeless canvas. Quite uplifting, yes, in a strange manner. I found the last line quite true, in and out of context. Rich write, here. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Lone Poppy" by Crimson Shade
- "This, a reel of disturbing images.. the mood eminates from this piece is halting..finely executed, I must say. The aura of Death is very plain here, Tremendously dark write."
Posted by Unknown on "Death" by Crimson Shade
- "*tears flowing freely*
I'm glad you know she's in a better place and that you'll join her someday, i know its hard to wait. Hang in there. "
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Mum" by Crimson Shade
- "wow, nice rhythm and rhyme, great conveyence too. I think its awesome to capture something like that in such a style...it adds to the feeling of true aftermath...kinda numb in a way, going through the motions."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "The Aftermath" by Crimson Shade
- "omg, it.... it is heartwrenchingly awesome! You are a gifted writer, for sure! The last line broke my heart. *Bravo* You are in my favs!"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Loneliness" by Crimson Shade
- "Fascinating outtake. I think I enjoyed this uplifting write. Not many choose that type of 'style' so to speak. :D I enjoyed this. I hope to be reading more by you my friend. :)"
Posted by Err0r on "The Lone Poppy" by Crimson Shade
- "damn good write, you know despair too well, unfortunately and you capture it equally well. you do the topic justice with your diction. ty for sharing"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Despair" by Crimson Shade
- "moving in all the ways "despair" can take.......articulate and far reaching.............well done.........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Despair" by Crimson Shade
