Comments by All Members
- "A lot of really cool things in here. I was fooled right up until "talking to your stone". Great concept of insanity instead of talking about what really happened. Proofreading might be the only way to enhance this."
Posted by Liz on "AS INSANITY SETS IN" by Darkest_Addiction
- "damn.. this is really good.. yea.. ill give a damn for ya.. i too have lied on that floor.. just wondering why it was that i was there.. but then i realized it was just the beggining to my entrance into my own heaven n hell"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "insane aslum floor" by Darkest_Addiction
- "This, darlin', doesn't need improvement. When I saw the part about 'her little brother' I found my tears abandoning the ducts in my eyes. This is just so heartbreaking, no one should be burried so young. Lovely as it can be"
Posted by Army Barbie on "her angel" by Darkest_Addiction
