Comments by All Members
- "i liked wearing a lot better... gives the sense of stone turning to sand and drifting away... but what'll ya do...
*laugh* ah, sweet sweet adjectives"
Posted by Jonas on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "MasoFish, Your compliment is humbling. However, the fact that you were able to convey the soul of my poem in its entirety, with fewer words and more eloquence, thus upstaging the poem itself, is just dirty pool. Showoff."
Posted by Stranger on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "it all fades, and here is the white room (rather dull... frankly) where all is right and words are meaningless"
Posted by Jonas on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "stapled to the earth by the flesh of your neck... bleeding and pouring out something (certainly, certainly) less than special... bleeding... something fades like oxygen not quite getting the brain... "
Posted by Jonas on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "... i get the feeling that this piece, so far has been misunderstood, utterly... else there would be much better commentary... (watch me totally misunderstand myself, lol)..."
Posted by Jonas on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "Nice, for lack of better words. This was a deep piece, and I don't know, I just really like it. Great job."
Posted by Six-Out on "Forgotten Poets" by Stranger
- "i am fond of this work...what an excellent metaphor..."But I am like an old hat or mask
That was never really in style
Left in a closet"...extremelly touching, sincere & simple."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Chris" by Stranger
- "no, the poem definitely goes deeper than a penthouse letter... i felt the abyss, the despair, the final comfort of drowning in emotion, clinging to her until that final instant when some fire dies. i am sad today."
Posted by Jonas on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- " The double entendre is cute. However, in my defense, this poem is not exactly a Penthouse letter. The metaphor was meant to go a little deeper. "
Posted by Stranger on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "I like this poem! Though in the christian mythology Moses parted the Red Sea, so that created a nasty visual in my head! Period!"
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "well stranger bravo! This is a masterpiece, and should go down in DP history. It's such a strong poem and the metaphor in which you used works so well... it grabbed my attention the minute I started reading. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "Woman" by Stranger
- "last comment i left i talked about tingles of empathy... now i talk about the tingles plus a tear shed, nostaligically and regretably, because these words again ring true for me"
Posted by Jonas on "Untitled Poem about Love" by Stranger
- "i really like this piece... i'm of the school of thought that these pieces of being reside in every person, man or woman... i believe that men and women are really not that different at all... actually the same."
Posted by Jonas on "Woman" by Stranger
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