Comments by All Members
- "I understand exactly the feelings behind this, and that scares me. Which means it's sending your message. Horribly good."
Posted by Liz on "Perfect Slave" by Stranger
- "metaphorically rich, like too much cotton candy... sticky sweet and in arms that speak of safety/security, but must still reach for the stars, unexplored... sexual, not too casual, demented like everyone, always running even if you're not moving"
Posted by Jonas on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "Boy with the German Shepherd face? Ouch! There's some good content here, must read more of your works.
-SP"
Posted by Unknown on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "screams of fear and joy, all in one, impossible to tell the difference. It transfers surreal images in my mind....thanks for sharing...{dia}"
Posted by diavolessa on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "the whole write had a combination of tension and dizziness till it concludes as a release...i truly enjoyed this one...so full of thought and feeling."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "the excitment and the fear all rolled into a good time with cotton candy, very nice.................O.
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Posted by Ophelia on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "this is absolutely amazing... both images woven together so tightly, so well, they become one vision."
Posted by KittyStryker on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "it is done here, this masterpiece, your surreal and artistic vision is translated perfectly; like electrodes to my willing brain.......i feel your words.........urban
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Posted by urbanhumility on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "hmmm, for some reason I couldn't get out of my mind some kind of dark image, yet happy times still filled with dread...great write, has interesting way of twisting my images...maybe I just kept thinking carn evil...I don't know"
Posted by Ravenblade on "Carnival" by Stranger
- "cyclical, running in circles, trying to heal as the venom just works deeper and in the attempts at alleaveation(sp?) of the symptoms more blood is lost..."
Posted by Jonas on "Remembering the Future" by Stranger
- "i can get no more than a chilled sense from this piece... there is something below the surface i cannot touch... but as my glance catches these livid words i do truly feel dawn is a long way off..."
Posted by Jonas on "Lucero" by Stranger
- "used, abused, lonely and looking for some semblance of love in a shattered world where none can be trusted but to be untrustworthy... lonliness"
Posted by Jonas on "Chris" by Stranger
- "oh wow! alone, the first section of the poem is excellent, a frozen moment, carbon frozen, shining... but the conversation lends such a strange twist, like growing old and browsing memories that will never come again..."
Posted by Jonas on "Sanctuary from Time" by Stranger
- "(Shiver) The hair on the back of my neck is standing up, always a sign that this is very good shit!"
Posted by Unknown on "Lucero" by Stranger
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