Comments by All Members
- "this took me by surprise as well. very well done and very intelligent. nicely done."
Posted by Twilight on "Woman" by Stranger
- "i'm speachless i dont know what to say ur words have left me dreaming while i'm awake i lovethis great great job"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Escape" by Stranger
- "Makes me think of some kind of cult sacrificing. This was very strong and painted such vivid images of death and the final understanding. wonderfully crafted."
Posted by Unknown on "Escape" by Stranger
- "i really truly enjoyed this. it took a moment in the beginning to realize what experience you were so eloquently describing. "and that i will never feel the sudden.." i love it. xoxo"
Posted by Sinnocence on "Escape" by Stranger
- "of truth as well. How wonderful of you to think this way. "I imagine I am waking from dream
And that I will never feel the sudden..."....I can only say one word: incredible."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Escape" by Stranger
- "To my surprise another work! My heart skipped a whole beat. I am fascinated at your dreams in an ocean made of wine and the whole world drunk and how you'd wish for you to be the universe....again this has drifted me into a land of fantasy and some sense "
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Escape" by Stranger
- "...and you are certain you are nto of Mr Cohen's loins? any comment I could of left ,remains within this one line..*I imagine the oceans are filled with wine And that the world is drunk * a stunning and compelling piece here...Loved it..
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Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Escape" by Stranger
- "There are so many images in this poem. I love "I imagine my skeleton is made of Copper colored coat hangers That bend, but will not break" That is so perfect. I love every step you take in this dream-like poem. Masterpiece.
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Posted by SnowQueen on "Escape" by Stranger
- "wow. i asked for another work... and this... wow. incredible. the images our mind can create to help us flee the mundane... or the horrid."
Posted by KittyStryker on "Escape" by Stranger
- "THis is perfect Stranger. It gave me a feeling of not wanting to live if it was without the one you love. A real romeo and juliet in the last moments thing. "
Posted by SnowQueen on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "this prose is intoxicating to all my senses, you have done well here my friend, this vision is fortified with a undying will, but some-how not requited.......you have impressed me once again.......urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "at the start I thought , this is going to be a peice on the treasures of woman and it was but also on the piracy of it all.... took me by surprise a bit,,well done~Silver"
Posted by Silver Spectre on "Woman" by Stranger
- "YOU! yea, i'm talking to you, AJ! write more... post more... whatever! drop a line as well, if you'd like, i'm at iasc_dubh @ hotmail . com ... stay in touch! "
Posted by Jonas on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "my heart stops and in as much breath as would hardly fill a thimble i think i've seen the perfect contrivance of sulfuric fire and white linen, where everything that ever was has once begun"
Posted by Jonas on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "what did i take from this.?..? ... fractal, the light is made up of many colours and just this once this very moment a perfect shade of violet has been cast on my white wall..."
Posted by Jonas on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "this flits and flutters from one subject to another, the transitions are great, awesome stuff stranger~Dawn"
Posted by IceDragoness on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "I think bast said it best here... Stange how wonderful it can be at the time but when it is lost the memory of wonderful times hurt. Maybe as we get older they turn back into wonderful memories.who knows~Silver~"
Posted by Silver Spectre on "Sentence" by Stranger
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