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- "Ah one of the most beautiful sonnet I've read these days! I am so glad you respected the structure! When all this sonnet story began I even wrote "How to write a sonnet" to get people to write such a materpiece =)"
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "The Cautious Man - Sonnet 4" by Delphoid-Q
- "Ahhh... At Long Last. So: Im Glad Your Doing The Pondering And i See That You Still Doing The Sonnet Thing. Great Write... Because I Know. It Must Be Said, However, That The Rhyme Flow Is A Bit Off... But Thats Just Nit-Picking. Yay. GPhD."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "The Cautious Man - Sonnet 4" by Delphoid-Q
- "Thank you muchly T/S. Believe it or not, your enthusiasm is actually what keeps me writing these. Thanks for all the praise and encouragement. You have really helped me to further my art."
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Haikus" by Delphoid-Q
- "Amazing ... you have a way of writing that pulls the audience into the world you create ... I love it! =)"
Posted by Loneal on "Boyhood" by Delphoid-Q
- "A beautiful work to reflect a beautiful mind. Joyous intoxication and frustration at being unable to properly share the feeling with others. Many thanks for gracing the world with your words ... =)"
Posted by Loneal on "A Tribute To My Muse - Sonnet 3" by Delphoid-Q
- "Greatness Of Character Comes From Earlier Experiences. Go For The Gold, And Never Look Back, never Settle For Anything Else. Destiny Has Its Maleable Ways... And Together We Moulded Our History And Set Our Path To Greatness! GPhD."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "Boyhood" by Delphoid-Q
- "If The World Knew It Would Be A Better Place, It Sums Up "Boyhood" Like I Can Imagine It, And Like I'm Sure A Select Few Can Too."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "Boyhood" by Delphoid-Q
- "Costa Boet... Its A New Era And EveryDay I Think Of Our Trials And Tribulations. A Tribute. The Last Stanza Is Especially Meaningful. I Got Every Word, Every Suggestion, Every Intention."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "Boyhood" by Delphoid-Q
- "You hereby have the permission of the author to use this piece. Just acknowledge the source, is all."
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "The Forest" by Delphoid-Q
- "Excellent.. Im stunned.. I want to use this in a werewolf game.. Great write. Monkey looking over the forest from the top of a tree.."
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "The Forest" by Delphoid-Q
- "Well Done Vre... Belting Them Out Like Some Old Man In A Candy Store... Keep It Up And I'll Have To Kill You... Or Maybe Just Buy You A "Twixt"..."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "The Forest" by Delphoid-Q
- "There is unrest in the forest
There is trouble with the trees
For the maples want more sunlight
And the oaks ignore their pleas
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/rush/thetrees.html THE FOREST is deep & full of vivid imagery, and tought, well done
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Posted by Unknown on "The Forest" by Delphoid-Q
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