Comments by All Members
- "In a million years, I could never tell you how much this touched me. I have my favorites, and I have poetry that has affected me deeply, and I hope I don't offend anyone else when I say that this is my favorite work of poetry I think I've ever read. "
Posted by lordshadow on "At The Edge Of The Sea" by Army Barbie
- "I could never have hoped to make something so beautifully painful from it. Once again, we tread the same waters. Let's hope we're strong enough not to drown. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "At The Edge Of The Sea" by Army Barbie
- ""And in this sky I’d lose you.
The beautiful aura you carried all these years …All gone."- i just keep on shattering upon re-reading. you are simply too amazing, and this is pure art. ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "At The Edge Of The Sea" by Army Barbie
- "this..completly broke my heart. i feel like i am in pieces upon some beach. christ, the command you have on your words..never one out of place, all fitting like a beautiful, tender puzzle. it's like breaking inside of a poem.."
Posted by Unknown on "At The Edge Of The Sea" by Army Barbie
- "Holy hell. This ia an incredible write. I think the format really helped the flow and meter, which, combined with the briliance of the words, created an amazing piece. I love it."
Posted by Thorn on "Firefly's Lament (Shiver)" by Army Barbie
- "ya know.... I don't normally comment on people's work for .. well my own reasons. But I enjoyed this, I liked the simplicity it tried to show, but enjoyed even more the content that shows a heart everyone would like to know. Great write"
Posted by Unknown on "My Sunshine Is Not Your Sunshine (Anymore)" by Army Barbie
- "*blinks* how did i miss this one? it's so breathtakingly lovely..god, you shatter me in ways i couldn't believe possible. your words bind me in deep sadness and beauty. *hugs* ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "(Accept this as my love.)" by Army Barbie
- ""Until the stars retire from their keys
And all I can hear
Is the lament of a firefly's goodbye".
Wow, what a stunning write. This is really incredible. I loved the whole thing!"
Posted by Eric on "Firefly's Lament (Shiver)" by Army Barbie
- "What can be said about this really? You have captured something truly grand in this piece. You honor your friends memory and that of every american who laid down their life for something they believed in. This is heartbreaking, breathtaking, and absolu"
Posted by Unknown on "Firefly's Lament (Shiver)" by Army Barbie
- "I hate Iraq. I hate bush, but our soldiers all stand tall to take that leap of faith for our country...or for bush that bastard. Very nice write my friend."
Posted by Err0r on "Firefly's Lament (Shiver)" by Army Barbie
- "god, this is touching..i felt the shivers, deep inside, and it almost tore. "Dance with me, my ghostly friend
Until the frostbite breaks the willow's limbs And the magnolia withers." your ability to create feelings from words always astounds me."
Posted by Unknown on "Firefly's Lament (Shiver)" by Army Barbie
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