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"this is probably the best display of honesty and raw emotion i've seen on this site in a long long time. Sinner...(refrence my poem "Sinner" for why I called you that)"
Posted by Unknown on "i'm not sorry it happened..." by xserratedsoulx

"Hot damn. Damn. Is. Hot. Haha, this was amazing...so short and so...I'm at a loss for words. Just know I thought this was amazing."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Lover, we are Dying" by xserratedsoulx

"Profound. Something in it struck a chord with me, though I'm not sure what. Nice work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Lover, we are Dying" by xserratedsoulx

""You Bleed Venom / Beneath worn Fingernails" - short write but captivating all the same - maybe to die with who you love isnt such a tragedy after all."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "Lover, we are Dying" by xserratedsoulx

"articulate and concise........well done...........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "the same demise awaits entangled souls" by xserratedsoulx

""OUr Tired Embers lay Forgotten- Ghosts, dying quietly in the snow." - love the flow of these lines. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Ashes too will Fade Away" by xserratedsoulx

"I feel your pain, i know this was written a while ago, i hope ur feeling better, i know i'm only just geting over my heartbreak and it's been almost 5 monthes, stay strong"
Posted by Unknown on "i'm not sorry it happened..." by xserratedsoulx

"fantastic, you've put a feeling i cannot describe in words, such an amazing write for such an amazing experience."
Posted by dead_inside on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"i left you a dpmail, and i'm about to send you another one.. so i hope you know how to check it."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Ashes too will Fade Away" by xserratedsoulx

"the velvet sky, wilting lover ,quietly in the snow.. the imagery you use in this piece is incredibly untouchably-beautiful/gorgeous/amazing. i love this piece.. very wonderful indeed.."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Ashes too will Fade Away" by xserratedsoulx

"this is so beautiful."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"to continue to grow as a writer, publish your works, and show everybody the talent that you have inside of your heart. .. bleed inside your words, not of your flesh.. you are beautiful."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The LIttle Girl" by xserratedsoulx

"sweet you, if this is deep and if this is really how it is for you, i hope you are not cutting yourself. i did that for quite along time and it is definitely not the answer to anything.. so if you are, please stop so that you will have the chance"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The LIttle Girl" by xserratedsoulx

""Cruelty is the best Form of Distraction".. so true, i love the ending.. this reminds me of my father actually, and my relationship with him.. I like the deep thoughts that dance around in this, lovely piece darling."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "SINNER" by xserratedsoulx

"I like the fact that you can push your feelings onto the reader using simple lines but strong words. . in particular I like the hope you express in the last stanza. nice work on this."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Destination...UNKNOWN" by xserratedsoulx

""Abandon your need for control. Abandon your need for Safety. You never really had either, anyway." Horray for nihilism! I bet your not, but this still made me happy. this is excellent "
Posted by Rone4611 on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"This isn't a poem? It's amazing as it- don't touch it."
Posted by KittyStryker on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"p.s.- faved."
Posted by doll on the rag on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"gorgeous. "
Posted by doll on the rag on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"Oh... my... god.... This is.... oh my god.... You have just... described a mosh pit so perfectly. You gave it the beauty that most ignore. Oh gods... this is just perfect. beyond perfect. -*Philla*-"
Posted by Philla on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx

"the rhyme in this makes it really cool, i particularily like the last stanza.. very romeo&juliet-esque. nice work here..."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Murder me with Sunshine" by xserratedsoulx

"darling, the first part of this is very beautiful.. the whole piece is, i just wish you weren't hurting so much.."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "i'm not sorry it happened..." by xserratedsoulx

"this is a very intense piece , i really like it. as for the comment you left on one of mine... yes the sentence is saying it's not just about being alive.. meaning it's not just about existing.. it's about making the most of your existence."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "drowning in my blood" by xserratedsoulx

"wow... that's really good... beautiful write"
Posted by murderedhearts_blood on "drowning in my blood" by xserratedsoulx

"Damn fine writing here.. you used your words with intelligent care. Though, the 'remember the all the misery' line.. was that meant to have two the's in it? Altogether fine work. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Murder me with Sunshine" by xserratedsoulx

"Good concept, i like it, i like it alot."
Posted by Unknown on "SINNER" by xserratedsoulx

"Very clear, nice write. I Appreciate finding works like yours. Keep it Up"
Posted by Unknown on "Destination...UNKNOWN" by xserratedsoulx

"Your writing is simplistic, yet you get your message across clearly. That is something to be proud of. Another fine write. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Destination...UNKNOWN" by xserratedsoulx

"True, religion falls short of it's righteousness.. good job. ~b"
Posted by blue on "SINNER" by xserratedsoulx

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