Comments by All Members
- "I agree with Lydia, how did this get overlooked indeed! This is brilliant. The imagery and cerebral contexts are stunning. its visceral. Loved this and rating it."
Posted by tmanzano on "EULOGY TO USED ARMOR" by xserratedsoulx
- "Retrospectively sound because some times we need to convince ourselves/others of our wants and desires. I love the soften tone that you bring out in this, and the ending sentiment it leaves deep inside my chest. "
Posted by soul_versing on "i'm not sorry it happened..." by xserratedsoulx
- "Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes. There are so many individual sentences here that I'd want to point, that it'd end up being the whole poem. But "You must.
Abandon your need for control.
Abandon your need for Safety.
You never really had either, anyway.", that just hits home, that's just so painfully accurate and heart breaking-ly beautiful about this whole hell of a mess. Thank you for sharing, thank you big time. "
Posted by Unknown on "story of a mosh pit (a diary entry to become poetry)" by xserratedsoulx
- "Wow this twisted my insides... At first so good, but in the end, I myself felt withered... Thank you for your poem!
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Posted by Unknown on "BULIMIA" by xserratedsoulx
- "Wow....I think this is what everyone does, despite whatever they say...everyone wants to live up to their expectations, and yet the hunger to live up to them is killing them. Good write."
Posted by KuroiBara on "drowning in my blood" by xserratedsoulx
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