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"beautifully crafted words that, in my interpretation, illustrate something illusive but real"
Posted by
Jonas
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"Wow, you know the sign of mature adult is being able to learn from your mistakes and move on, so what does this poem say about you?"
Posted by
Dr Benway
on "
note to self [elegant words are meant to last forever]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"Sounds rather bitter, if you ask me. Maybe time to let go?"
Posted by
Unknown
on "
note to self [elegant words are meant to last forever]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"It's not what it seems.We dont talk nor does she post here anymore from what i know.It was a simple dedication because aside from everything that happened she was always good with words.Thats all.Take it as you will though =)"
Posted by
redtearswhitesnow
on "
note to self [elegant words are meant to last forever]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"Why the name change?It saddens me that Anidayz doesnt post anymore.She was one of my favorites here besides you and Amy."
Posted by
redtearswhitesnow
on "
[a lesson in jealousy] a fracture in gods work
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"Mhm. This is wonderland, by the way. Or was."
Posted by
Unknown
on "
[a lesson in jealousy] a fracture in gods work
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"After about 2 years,yes.Seems alot of the veterans are gone or hardly post."
Posted by
redtearswhitesnow
on "
[a lesson in jealousy] a fracture in gods work
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"You're back."
Posted by
Unknown
on "
[a lesson in jealousy] a fracture in gods work
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"can't function after reading this, leaves me dizzy, im a good way. ^_^"
Posted by
Unknown
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"This was wheezy, like the croak of breath coming from lungs more cancer than flesh. It was desperate, like jumping off the edge of the world to catch the sun. "
Posted by
TheBardOfBlasphemy
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"words lost between a dream and reality......leaves me completely breathless"
Posted by
elisa
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"fucking brilliant! damn! well done urban......."
Posted by
urbanhumility
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"like june said, i loved that second stanza..although this entire poem was a brief painting, beautiful and vivid. great write. ~bethany"
Posted by
Unknown
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"wow .. the second stanza, especially.. wow.. you are so beautifully disarrayed in this.. and it is tragic how lovely you place sorrow.. silver-lined.. as if it were to light your sky as a strangled moon.. ~ tripping inside your mind"
Posted by
Unknown
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"You words just pound against my head, perfection. I loved this."
Posted by
The Crimson Queen
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"potent. i've missed your words."
Posted by
AniDayz
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
"Magical! serenade the stars - nice concept, Graet sparse dreamy effort - Col."
Posted by
Shadow Rapture
on "
He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
" by
redtearswhitesnow
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