no apologies

By swing_the_hammer

i found the brain
of kurt cobain
was in my mouth
i blew it out
(just like him)
it tasted of lyric
and lithium

i found the source
of my remorse
was nothing more
than slamming doors
(or so it's seeming)
that dreams are god
and god is dreaming

i found after time
it gets harder to shine
as he flickered in Rome
and barely came home
(it touches my heart)
how tragedy becomes
our art

i found myself
in someone else
but he swallowed his spark
and the light went dark
(as the sky turned grey)
is it really better to burn out
than to fade away?

i found my mind
is best designed
to seek and find
like stars aligned
so speak adam and eve
and sing flora and fauna
"with the lights out,
it's less dangerous"
but with them on
it's nirvana

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© 2007 swing_the_hammer
Published on Wednesday, April 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i grew up on nirvana so i was always going to identify with this...but still the poem alone is perfect -it stings -like acid, caustically deconstructing the senselessness/tragedy of Cobain's suicide through your eyes certainly/ and i think many others too -there's a lot i'd like to say but really the poem says it all much better then i ever could - and the first stanza is f***ing genius by the way.

  • disc On Thursday, May 10, 2007, disc (36)By person wrote:

    The one thing I've noticed with all of your writes (so far), is that there's a definite consistency throughout them. Your poems have a tempo that rings out in my head. Keep doing it.

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