Anger , Sadness... Speechless
By openureyes
It took every last breath I had to scream those last few words.
My
heart pounds.
My head stings so numb.
I curl into a ball
that once felt safe.
But that was a lifetime ago.
I cry
to myself in a raspy voice
The walls too thick for my desperation
to be heard
A foggy mirror
My knees cold against the floor
I dont like you
who are you
why cant you just be
getting tired
running on fear
so lost
like
so many times before
never as empty
never as broken
as
now
in comes
more
and more
Pain
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© 2007 openureyes
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On Saturday, April 28, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
This was so brutal and raw...like the true effect of a heartbreak described in painful detail. Brilliant piece. -Carl
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On Wednesday, April 25, 2007, Vilification
(20) wrote:
i never know what to say on these other then i enjoy the poem a lot...try something new today..
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On Wednesday, April 25, 2007, openureyes
(56) wrote:
To overlyreedeemed: no i dont want children, there great but not for me. And sadly i think i cant ne way
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A former member wrote:
beautiful. ~ saddened.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
you dont ever want to have children?
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, openureyes
(56) wrote:
wow i didnt even think about it sounding like that... interesting,overlyredeemed, and i hope i never know first hand :)
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, Templer
(22) wrote:
Awesome. I like it and it makes me tingle.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
for real it sounds like a good way to describe labor.... until now ive never had the words for it. cool.
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
i have a sick way of admiring pain.......i love it ~*dani*~