i don't know

By totaltrip

i don't think i know anything anymore
all i know is how to go through the motions
what i want i got and what i got i don't want
i make no sense anymore
my ambitions are a vague memory
and my memories are full of painful nostalgia
i don't cry because i don't feel sad enough
i don't smile because it doesn't feel real
i don't die because i don't have the energy to
i don't live because i don't have any hope
there are blurry feelings of who I want
and even more blurry thoughts on what I am doing

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© 2007 totaltrip
Published on Sunday, March 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • A former member wrote: Nice! X]

  • A former member wrote: All the reasons for my depression dissapeared, but it remained. Though you have yet to experiment with ideas and thoughts and concepts. I like your style. Reminds me of me at 16. Frustrated and longing for a reason behind all this pain......:( another frowny cause smileys are too used.

  • A former member wrote: hmmmm now that is a predicament. i am quite comfy knowing I know not... as the Socratic edict goes... perhaps knowing that one knows that one does not know is the most important base upon which to figure out what it is one wants and should do.

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