Tears & Pain

By Tania

I wish I could surrender my soul;
and shed these clothes that have become my skin
see the liar that burns deep within.
Deep within my needing.

I wish I could open the doors to my mind;
hold memories free from tears
help me understand my years,
I’m so cold from my fears.
I’m frozen.

But as I try to remember who I used to be;
I can only run and hide..
close my eyes and keep it all inside
a symphony of tears and rain..
Its more that just words…

its tears and pain.

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Published on Tuesday, February 6, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Tears & Pain"

On Tuesday, October 6, 2015, themasterhunter (43) wrote:

The sadness and the almost fallen theme to this is great. You are now one of my favorites.
On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

I'm glad to see you this morning. You've been missed. :}
On Thursday, May 17, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

Beautiful dear.So painfully beautiful.
On Monday, February 26, 2007, dead_inside (32) wrote:

this is brilliant, the way you convey emotion and raw talent, I'd have thought you have a bright future in writing should you choose that path!
On Monday, February 26, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

Thank you. personally it is just a form of release.. its more or less just a little hobby to kill time thats all. But thank you all the same :)
A former member wrote: This was wonderful... A runaway from our own self... Deep and lovely. Keep on writing :)
On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, jack paper (121) wrote:

our hardest battles are fought with ourselves... i hope you continue to post
On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, LOKI (161) wrote:

I love the emotion in this.You display it well.Nice.LOKI
A former member wrote: tania my dear this was fabulous. when are you going to upgrade? ~ red.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Very emotional and raw...wonderful write.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

the shear force of your will. and who can forget the rhyme scheme (the thing i have most trouble with, kudos kiddo, definatly get an applause from me, honest and sincere, dont change!
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

the swirl of desperation with a touch of falling from grace leaves my heart at a bitter standstill, a beat frozen for a single moment and at the same time dries tears. to work past a world of expectation is a hard road, but im sure you will conquer with
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

with...........?
A former member wrote: Fluidly well written. There's definately room for you around here. Welcome to DP.
On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

aww thank you!