Failing

By Adam

Take me
Beat me
Strike me hard
For I deserve it
For failing like a ‘tard


Torture me
Hang me
Till the end
For I deserve it
Failing to be your true friend

Take me
Beat me
Strike me harder
For I am nothing
That could be a martyr

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© 2007 Adaml
Published on Wednesday, January 31, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Thursday, October 6, 2016, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    Simple yet so full of emotion. Well done - 10:43

  • Steven86175 On Sunday, September 13, 2015, Steven86175 (16)By person wrote:

    Love the darkness and emotion that went into. I could feel it. Nice write

  • Mari On Saturday, January 26, 2008, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    eh.. let it go, everybody fucks up sometime..

  • sIo On Thursday, May 24, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this is sad....you should love yourself more because there are many people that already do...

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    this was hot for some reason, though i dont know if that is what you were trying to get across, i loved it!

  • Cattarax On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Cattarax (215)By person wrote:

    Adam I am so upset that you would think this of your self .. but we all have are times when down is low and up and is high .. and during those times we find out who are true friends are

  • Cattarax On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Cattarax (215)By person wrote:

    Everything means nothing in the end .. and with saying that I mean everything that you say now .. will mean nothing tomorrow when you find out you are better then this .. I am sorry that you had to go through that .. but I am always here for you ~T~

  • A former member wrote: damn..u've certainly grown in your writing.

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    wow...simply wow.

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    I think in all honesty this was incredible, I can feel the emotions you wanted to progress through each word.. It saddened me..

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