Failing
By Adam
Take me
Beat me
Strike me hard
For I deserve it
For failing like a ‘tard
Torture me
Hang me
Till the end
For I deserve it
Failing to be your true friend
Take me
Beat me
Strike me harder
For I am nothing
That could be a martyr
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© 2007 Adaml
Published on Wednesday, January 31, 2007.
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On Thursday, October 6, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
Simple yet so full of emotion. Well done - 10:43
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On Sunday, September 13, 2015, Steven86175
(16) wrote:
Love the darkness and emotion that went into. I could feel it. Nice write
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On Saturday, January 26, 2008, Mari
(425) wrote:
eh.. let it go, everybody fucks up sometime..
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On Thursday, May 24, 2007, sIo
(926) wrote:
this is sad....you should love yourself more because there are many people that already do...
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
this was hot for some reason, though i dont know if that is what you were trying to get across, i loved it!
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On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Cattarax
(215) wrote:
Adam I am so upset that you would think this of your self .. but we all have are times when down is low and up and is high .. and during those times we find out who are true friends are
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On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Cattarax
(215) wrote:
Everything means nothing in the end .. and with saying that I mean everything that you say now .. will mean nothing tomorrow when you find out you are better then this .. I am sorry that you had to go through that .. but I am always here for you ~T~
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A former member wrote:
damn..u've certainly grown in your writing.
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
wow...simply wow.
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On Wednesday, January 31, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
I think in all honesty this was incredible, I can feel the emotions you wanted to progress through each word.. It saddened me..