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never let me go
By alaskanamber
on the outside looking in
unable to take the first step
yearning to gather you close
whisper I love you's in the night
tears run in mountain streams from my eyes
knowing this is your hurdle not mine
all my faith and love
may not cure your emptiness
so patiently I wait
my breathe fogging the glass
in this moment in time I am nothing
a shadow lurking in the night
answers to your hearts doubts
a spirit in the corner of your mind
stitches mending your torn soul
one day my friend
you will let me in
as I gently kiss your lips
light up your life
so silently i beckon you
understand my hearts desires
feel the sirens call of my body
gather me close
never let me go
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© 2007 alaskanamber
Comments on "never let me go"
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A former member wrote:
This REALLY spoke to me... brought tears to my eyes. I feel this in my heart. Thanks for sharing! Great and wonderfully beautiful piece.
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A former member wrote:
OMG :(...im feeling like this
u've made my night
like one said..its very soft spoken..its calming and very loving though the speaker is going through so much pain and interior fightin
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A former member wrote:
i can interpret this on the receiving end of the spectrum; thought-provoking.
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A former member wrote:
I love what you write Amber. This was very beautiful.
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On Saturday, January 6, 2007, AniDayz
(820)
wrote:
this is a beautifully expressed piece...wonderful imagery and softly spoken passionate intensity...
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On Saturday, January 6, 2007, alaskanamber
(64) wrote:
but it's all about timing right lol. how's the saying go? "hurry up and wait" and i take another shot to pass the hours
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On Saturday, January 6, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Timing can be such a complex, frustrating pain in the...Argh!
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