eye eye eye

By swing_the_hammer

i live in an acid dream
i have awesome self esteem
i built a giant laser beam
to send you to the moon
BOOM BOOM BOOM

i live my life all gossamer
never at a loss for words
but i just tell it to the birds
since you stole my heart away
HEY HEY HEY

reality is just a joke
where they keep all the common folk
i may be tired i may be broke
but i'm no sorry sap
CLAP CLAP CLAP

i fly kites in outer space
drink my beer like it's a race
but i just can't forget your face
it reminds me of your name
BANG BANG BANG

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© 2006 swing_the_hammer
Published on Thursday, October 19, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, January 3, 2007, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    *joins in the partay* Wooooooooooo-hoooooooooooooooo!!!!! I really enjoyed this, nice and offbeat with a 'don't give a fuck' attitude. Fuckin' write on.. *downs a bottle of Tuaca*

  • hate_doll On Monday, October 23, 2006, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    I love it's quirkiness, as well. the rhythm and your style is out of this world, I love love love it.

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