How can I tell you what I feel for you?

By Frater Synth



How can I tell you what I feel for you?
When I think of you my feelings twist inside
As if someone's fist reached in and grabbed a few,
And turned and turned them tight and tangled. I've tried
Somehow to say: You're the sun in my sky,
The wind that takes me where I want to go,
The sweet incense that makes me feel so high
That loving you seems all I need to know.
But it all sticks in my throat! It sounds too cute,
Empty as a wrinkled paper bag.
You won't believe it! Better I stay mute
Than offer you cliches that make you gag.
And yet I wish to tell you of my love,
If only love its own locks would remove!

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Copyright 2005 Frater Synth
Published on Sunday, April 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: YOU FUCKING DICK!! Its guys like you that give guys a bad name, You fucking Wanna Be Player. Go Fuck Yourself!!!][ ][ BITCH!

  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, October 13, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Wow, this is both beautiful and sweet, dear Jay. You are a very gifted writer. ~*~Tart~*~

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    well, its either that, or one day she would wind up dead and then she would never know how you feel.. better to say it stupidly then to regret never saying it at all

  • A former member wrote: I love, love, LOVE the rhyme scheme...this is perfect beyond perfection. Excellent. *Evangel*

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