How can I tell you what I feel for you?
By Frater Synth
How can I tell you what I feel for you?
When I think
of you my feelings twist inside
As if someone's fist reached in
and grabbed a few,
And turned and turned them tight and tangled.
I've tried
Somehow to say: You're the sun in my sky,
The wind
that takes me where I want to go,
The sweet incense that makes me
feel so high
That loving you seems all I need to know.
But
it all sticks in my throat! It sounds too cute,
Empty as a wrinkled
paper bag.
You won't believe it! Better I stay mute
Than offer
you cliches that make you gag.
And yet I wish to tell you of my
love,
If only love its own locks would remove!
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Copyright 2005 Frater Synth
Published on Sunday, April 23, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "How can I tell you what I feel for you?"
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A former member wrote:
YOU FUCKING DICK!! Its guys like you that give guys a bad name, You fucking Wanna Be Player. Go Fuck Yourself!!!][ ][ BITCH!
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On Friday, October 13, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Wow, this is both beautiful and sweet, dear Jay. You are a very gifted writer. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
well, its either that, or one day she would wind up dead and then she would never know how you feel.. better to say it stupidly then to regret never saying it at all
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A former member wrote:
I love, love, LOVE the rhyme scheme...this is perfect beyond perfection. Excellent. *Evangel*