...kissing lotus petals...
By NikesRain
singing .hollow. across cold stones
…the echoes bounce
.reverberating. back consecutive blows
…wings fading
.quietly. perfumed in autumn
:
..i never thought..
the kiss
of snow
was anything
more than my .heartbeat.
ringing off icicles in a form of .grace.
:
falling in .waves. of prismatic moonlight
…the only thing i can see as beautiful
.hiding. in my water colored parchment skin
…collapsing useless
.sorrow. staining lashes
:
... i never thought
the delicacy
of a breeze
was anything
more than my .sighs.
dancing across drifting clouds .voiceless.
:
swept up in .illusions. of tenderness
...the one thing i wanted to hold close
.resting. in pools of dreaming naiveté
...cradled broken
.serenity. pulling deeper
:
staring .silent. across lost yesterdays
...tears slipping unknown
.descending. in far musings
...wings folded
.quietly. singing hollow
Comments on "...kissing lotus petals..."
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A former member wrote:
there no possible way to express something more tenderly, softly and fleatingly, something more fragile, more ephemeral, more fuckin beautiful than, than this, than you. You amaze me
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On Monday, March 20, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I felt like a snowflake falling softly to the ground in a docile wind! Magical, beautiful and so serene. Julia~
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A former member wrote:
visually stunning; echoes of the slightest ethereal freedoms and melancholies; like its own small book of lamentations.. . stirring....
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, manywalks
(750) wrote:
wonderous and wonderfull, leaving me disappointed it ended...water colored parchment skin...absolutely fabulous... ~ wen
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
absolutely exquisite ~V
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
like the vapor of despair......this slowly moves and envelopes you.....breathing it in......stings with sorrow........well done....well spoken....................urban