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time reflection...
By urbanhumility
fast times...
a life time...
how long...?
Avant-guarde company...
a "Fellini" movie so urban so unyielding...
unbelievable...
my reflection...
my eyes un-fold a life, a passion...
a sub-culture imbued with unparalleled recklessness....
my reflection... a boy
a mirror... a man
This "story" must pause...
regret...
sorrow...
so much lost, in my own Divine Race...
different mirrors, a changed glance....subjective passion...
must change
you forgot the words...
The soul in "your" eyes always knows what is right...
i follow my glance in the mirror...
for hours...
my humility cares....
i ponder...
space,
my direction,
my Divine Compass...
this night...
my reflection fades...
there are more answers than time.......
ps. you never lie to yourself....therein lies a good path....
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© 2006 urbanhumility
Published on Saturday, March 18, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, April 12, 2007, Dark Moon
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wrote:
Very thought prevoking write hun...again I'm touched by your writes!
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A former member wrote:
:-) Your Poetry touches the shit outta me:-) good stuff ][ ][
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A former member wrote:
This is a beautiful poem with beautiful words.
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A former member wrote:
like wisdom picked from the measureless space within, an instinctive navigation of how you belong to the search for yourself..
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On Monday, May 22, 2006, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
Baking soda and flutes, completely stunning: Just when Im on the brink of a sickening-god-awful dry lerch like taste in my mouth, Ive learned that stopping by and reading upon your works assures its cancelation. I thank you for that wise one. Daniel
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A former member wrote:
I never know what is right, but this is true, and crafted by a creator of worlds
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On Monday, April 17, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I needed to read this again, because only your words can soothe my soul at the moment... thank you....... Julia~
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On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
sublime truth...this was crafted beautifully ~kristy
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On Saturday, March 25, 2006, sIo
(926) wrote:
i need to read this again later to express my admiration for it...
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Mr King
(547) wrote:
You always touch, inspire, and make me reflect deeply when I read you my brother... Thank you always... Love, Seth
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Mr King
(547) wrote:
YEPP! There it is!
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On Monday, March 20, 2006, Muse
(57) wrote:
hmm this left me in a sort of serene, thoughtful state. don't know if that's what you were aiming for..but..i havnt been this way in a long time. thank you, this piece was much appreciated.
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A former member wrote:
just soothing..in a hesitant, marvelous way..this sung in so many words, of a flawless art, this piece. lovely.
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
"my humility cares" OMG@that line Charley! Oh how I wish I could see myself in such the same way. I'm far from being any kind of angel, because the angel I see is you. I had to take a breath, cuz I realized whilst reading this, I hadn't took a breath.....
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
.... you are truly a gift to this site, and to anyone who knows you, or is lucky enough to be in your company. I love you, my friend! Julia~
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, manywalks
(750) wrote:
broken lined and hesitant flows of carefully chiseled art. ~ wen
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