Of this and more...

By Spiritus_Frumenti

The word nothing often feels like so much,
Filled with such hopeless embrace
As our minds fall into grace
In why pure emptiness never exists
A true void will never persist
If we can give it substance with our souls instead
Making every atom our own
Belonging to our suffering
To our questions
And to our fates
Instilling regret into anything
Not covered by the Sun's morning rays
Making desolate mountains wish they crumble away
When each lonely particle in space becomes a tear
Gravity's force acting as a semblance of our longing
Drawing the world so near it tears into nothing
The same nothing that always feels like so much...

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© 2006 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Friday, February 24, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A Life Without You On Saturday, May 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    Wow, what an excellent picture you have laid across a canvas here. Intrigued I am...

  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    Wise conclusion ...the whole work was an interesting ride .

  • urbanhumility On Monday, March 6, 2006, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    your words have encompassed so much here......perhaps a cosmic explanation of nothing.......perhaps everything......well done......................urban

  • A former member wrote: "each lonely particle in space become a tear" - this is wonderfully contructed. Profound. A joy to read.

  • A former member wrote: a spiraling contemplation of nothing that covers everything and makes me wonder if there is anything that persists like nothing does

  • A former member wrote: so philosophical and beautiful..this brushed across my soul in monumental sighs.

  • Solace On Saturday, February 25, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    the void - substantial with souls...freakin amazing...seriously...You have this ability to create literature both original and interesting - i envy you on many levels...

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