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+* Arcadia hidden in Night *+
By NikesRain
clouds brush across stars
lingering in phantasmic embraces
we know their sweeping secret
having found the effervescence
the key to everlasting bliss
in the reliquary of a dream of ages
the warmth of you
so close and exquisite
intoxicating to every sense
as you fit me against you
your radiating landscape
needing mine to complete your horizon
so we can exist endlessly untouchable
breathing in synchronous shivering
we conform so flawlessly
you graze a whisper against my neck
it’s expelled in feathered sighs from my lips
your eyes speak to me of love and bliss
and i dive wholehearted into their depths
filling my lungs and sight with their saturation
drowning willingly in promised exultation
you are sedation and rapture
capturing in tender sensualities so delicate
instilling languid fascination and serenity
then consuming my senses in such divinity
my soul and spirit cry out for you
gasping from kisses deep and spellbinding
shuddering in waves of anticipated nirvana
heaven and paradise dwell in your passion
each caress feeding longings and desires
i am engulfed in aching wanton flames
needing to possess you exquisitely entirely
and surrender to you and your hunger completely
i am the shore which thirsts for your driving waves
the tide that wants to wrap you in an empyrean forever
stars shine bright and clouds drift sweet
but you and i know their secret
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© 2006 nikesrain
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On Saturday, August 11, 2007, Winterwords
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wrote:
...to die for I have never felt more alone than now
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On Friday, March 3, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
"heaven and paradise dwell within your passion" this line killed me......so beautiful and so eloquent. this is an articulate masterpiece.......i am in awe of your prose, stunned!...........so very well done............urban
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(186) wrote:
Wow...B-e-a-utiful i love it
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On Monday, February 20, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...i just can't get enough of this...*is insatiable*
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, Armand
(57) wrote:
as you fit me against you your radiating landscape needing mine to complete your horizon... i am the shore which thirsts for your driving waves the tide that wants to wrap you in an empyrean forever you are still the master of metaphor, and that
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On Sunday, February 19, 2006, Armand
(57) wrote:
is why i will always come back to your works.
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On Sunday, February 12, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this wrapped my mind in silk and caressed a sigh from my lips...exquisite and almost as gorgeous as you ~kristy
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
Like sinking into velvet, this...lushly, richly beautiful write. Gorgeous.
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
"as if your radiating landscape/needs mine to complete your horizon"... That line is just beautiful. You are beautiful & it so shines through your work. Inside, out....(agrees w/Brian, no words seem worthy) Julia~
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On Monday, February 6, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
You make it sound as if bliss could be tangible, and a person could be wrapped in it. ^V^
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On Monday, February 6, 2006, Solace
(1069) wrote:
This is an amazing piece - wonderfully exposed and beautiful in its depth and eloquence like complete enrapture - abandon and 1+1=1 - a marvellous equation...
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On Monday, February 6, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...seamless bodies....there is nothing more desirable...mmm...this has a very nice feel.
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A former member wrote:
i could almost feel the heat emanating from this one. a languid embrace indeed. bravo.
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, caustic ink
(3) wrote:
i love this poem. yet another write as lovely as the writer :) beautiful. ~G
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful, a very lovely write, damn this was good!!! ~Janette
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i love this..especially the last 2 lines..'stars shine bright and clouds drift sweet but you and i know their secret' and i agree w/ bethany...its flawless..great job! -Kel
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A former member wrote:
your words flow so flawlessly..and the ending is absolutely gorgeous.
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