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You for me
By Adam
I know this is not real dark, but i like the comments (good or bad) so
i thought I would post on this site and not just poetly (tie for second-but
still only one person liked it... owell)
You
Beautiful, Strong
Keeping me alive
You’ll lead me forever
Thanks
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© 2006 Adam
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On Saturday, April 25, 2020, FlowMyTears
(53)
wrote:
it's ironic how we seek inspiration in a world that has all but destroyed religion, nice work
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On Tuesday, January 5, 2016, Lab Rat
(131) wrote:
I will always love how poetry and turn 11 words into a thousand thoughts and emotions. Thank you.
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On Tuesday, January 5, 2016, Lab Rat
(131) wrote:
*can turn... that is!
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On Thursday, November 5, 2015, soul_versing
(883) wrote:
Powerful sentiment. Someone giving you 'more' of a reason to live. You -with your beauty, -with your strength ...breathtaking, so many women would love to hear a man say this to them. I've once heard that, a woman is a man's rock, and a man is a women's weakness. -unknown .I see that in this piece, thank you.
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
I like it; I think it's a nice sentiment, and i'm surprised more don't like it. Dark or not, it's a good poem.
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A former member wrote:
inspiring :)
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On Monday, April 14, 2008, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
an ode of merrit
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On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Short and sweet. Love it.-Gin
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
beautiful:)
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On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Aww this was short but was just full of love that it just rippled my heart, this was beautiful Adam^.^
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On Friday, January 6, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
diffrent...its like coded i mean i see what it says but its almost like im missing something like that only u knows about but its cool
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On Wednesday, January 4, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
short and sweet..and it doesnt have to be a dark poem...i have some poems that arent 'dark' but anyway..good write! -Kel
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A former member wrote:
lol "thanks". short and sweet, with the gratitude expressed at the end.
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I stand by my comment on Poetly. On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, TaintedButterfly (123) writes: "More like a beautiful attempt!"
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