Ashes too will Fade Away

By xserratedsoulx

Oh, my Desperate Lover,
we were a Shooting Star,
A Brief and Burning Song
Illuminating the Darkness,
Bleeding our life in a Shower of Sparks.

But, oh, my Wilting Lover,
Surrender these Memories to teh Dust,
For we have traced our Path through Velvet Sky
with a Passion now Extinguished.
OUr Tired Embers lay Forgotten-
Ghosts, dying quietly in the snow.

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© 2005 xserratedsoulx
Published on Thursday, December 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    sooo lovely...love these beautiful words you write:)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, February 2, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "OUr Tired Embers lay Forgotten- Ghosts, dying quietly in the snow." - love the flow of these lines. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i left you a dpmail, and i'm about to send you another one.. so i hope you know how to check it.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    the velvet sky, wilting lover ,quietly in the snow.. the imagery you use in this piece is incredibly untouchably-beautiful/gorgeous/amazing. i love this piece.. very wonderful indeed..

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