Giving this all away
By D3ADT0WN
I will give you my soul,
give you my body,
You just have to promise
You are good to me.
I will get together with you,
Only if you be true.
If you be good to me,
Then this will be all for you.
Now I've given up everything,
And now you kill me.
You broke my heart,
And tore it apart.
I don't know why you did this,
I didn't know you were like this,
I don't care what you say or do,
I just want my life back from you.
You took it away
Without having anything to say.
Then you left without a sign
Taking everthing i left behind.
I lost everything.
You don't care you took all that.
You don't care about anything.
You just used me for my shit.
You didn't care about me.
[Edit:1 12/27/08]
(Any ideas or comments on how its written please let me know, thanks.)
Comments on "Giving this all away"
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On Tuesday, January 1, 2008, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
I like the way you expressed these feelings that many probably couldn't express. thanx for sharing the hurt.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
this is great, youve expressed pain in your words,well done
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On Thursday, November 23, 2006, nell
(271) wrote:
nothing can take your heart and soul unless you let it,such familiar pain in this, i know it's cliche, but it makes you stronger in the end
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A former member wrote:
I don't think your heart is one that can be taken away. Bruised badly, perhaps but yours to keep if you want to learn to love again.
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On Thursday, July 13, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
the begining i dont agree with at all... then again i ask for people to hurt me.. but towards the end i agree with the pain and hurt and i know it sucks when people dont give a flying fuck.. if you need me, im usually on dp
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was just great, fantastic. I love it and felt the pain so barefully I was left speechless and rendered bruised from these words.
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On Thursday, May 18, 2006, PassionateDarkDesire
(28) wrote:
This is amazing... I know the feeling also... you words are powerful and I can feel the pain. Great write.
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, D3ADT0WN
(186) wrote:
thanks
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, veingo
(533) wrote:
I know the feeling. I could have written the same thing. Well done. ^V^
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
wow in so many words i know how u feel and i also know how bad it hurts sorry