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to stand alone
By Darkest_Addiction
to stand alone in all your pain
that no one understands
to face the day and all its hate
with no one to hold your hand
to cry at night
with no one there to dry your tears
to hate your life and all its worth
with no way to make it right
to watch your dreams die
and no way to bring them back to life
to feel the pain everyday
with no way to get away
this is why we die inside
when we live our lives this way
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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
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A former member wrote:
I really liked this poem. At the beginning you had a different rhyme going then half way through you seemed to drop it but it still has the same effect. Well done! ^_^
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A former member wrote:
Damn! I dont know how i missed your work before! I love your poems.. And this one is the TRUTH! It feels so personal..
Thank you! Keep writing!
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, manicheism
(43)
wrote:
touching write, and i think many will relate to it. good job!
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
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On Monday, January 9, 2006, Adam
(245) wrote:
this is so well put, I think that most of DP is summed up right here... I can relate so well to this. You know I am here for you!
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On Monday, December 5, 2005, Cetra
(16) wrote:
I LIVE THAT LIFE. WELL PUT.
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