She's gone

By StAinedNblood

Silent
And yet so dark
Like her mind's a black hole
She's deadly
The scar's unknown
In her eyes the signs so clear
You can't look past the tears though

There's pain through her arm
But still she remains comotosed
Like she's dead and gone
Her ocean grey eyes
Always hide behind the mascara
That makes her look like she's cried
She's not real
Just a figment, a mirage
It's how she feels

Forever it seems she walks around this way
Til one night the pain that's there surfaces
Slowly she walks to her room in silence
In her hand, her father's gun
She moves the gun up to her head
The tears now choking her breath
As she pulls the trigger, the sound fills the room
The tears fall silent and turn into blood
She's gone

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© 2005 StAinedNblood
Published on Sunday, November 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • coly On Sunday, November 13, 2005, coly (54)By person wrote:

    yhats aswome but sad

  • A former member wrote: wow, thats pretty deep... good write

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, November 13, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Wow...To be honest? I'm heavily anti-asuicide.And I usually hate suicide poems, I hate the content of this, but it hit like, Many said, like a jackhammer... Scholar

  • manywalks On Sunday, November 13, 2005, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Hits with the surity of a jackhammer in the gut. ~ mw

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