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AS INSANITY SETS IN
By Darkest_Addiction
i see you in the shadows
in the corner of my eye
every time i think of you
i cant help but wonder why
why the person i love most in life
is the one that drives me mad
as insanity sets in
your face begins to fade
you asked me if i loved you
and i begged with you to stay
but insanity had taken hold
and i had to let you go
you said id never be happy
living life this way
i yelled and screamed
but you wouldnt let me stay
as insanity set in and i was
forced to let you go
the people know ive gone insane
i can see it in thire face
as im talking to your stone
i touch the words written there
"my sanity forever lost without you"
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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Sunday, October 23, 2005.
Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "AS INSANITY SETS IN"
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A former member wrote:
Aww. So Sad. I think I can relate to this. I just wrote a poem similer to this today:-) Nicely written:-) ][Nstant ][Nsanity
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A former member wrote:
awsome job
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A former member wrote:
ouch...this cuts deep
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On Friday, December 30, 2005, JiNx
(98)
wrote:
Very nicely written.. quite tragic.
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, Solitary Dreamer
(24) wrote:
"talking to your stone" surprised me as well...very well written piece I enjoyed reading it.
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On Sunday, November 6, 2005, Liz
(267) wrote:
A lot of really cool things in here. I was fooled right up until "talking to your stone". Great concept of insanity instead of talking about what really happened. Proofreading might be the only way to enhance this.
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On Sunday, November 6, 2005, Liz
(267) wrote:
Critiques aside, though, thank you for sharing your favorite.
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On Monday, October 24, 2005, aCiD aNgEL
(32) wrote:
wow, this was a great write. ive been there... thanks for that. keep up the good work, welcome to DP and stick around ok? :) - aCiD
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