Forever In Her Eyes
By darkness_descends
Laying face to face
Falling into her gaze
Time loses meaning
Looking inside each other
Souls intertwined
As you leave your bodies
And enter each others minds
All barriers come down
No feelings hidden
No secrets remain
Words become useless
As more can be said with silence
All truths can be seen
And questions answered
Tears are devoured
Fears laid to rest
Doubts crumble away
In her stare
Depression can not survive
Sadness can only be a memory
The meaning of life can be understood
Love sweeps over you like a wave
Making dreams a reality
And wishes come true
Unblinking locked in a stare
All of this is said with out words
As the connection is broken
Maybe a second passed
Maybe an hour
You come back to your own body
And suddenly realize
She has to be the one
You could spend a thousand life times searching for
And still never hope to find
Because you can see forever in her eyes.
Comments on "Forever In Her Eyes"
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A former member wrote:
This is truly beautiful- if I ever experienced that feeling, I would not be able to express it as well as you do. Awesome job.
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On Wednesday, March 26, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I must've missed this one, I dunno how though. Great job Karl. I hope that one day I can share the same kind of love that you have with my own somone special. Keep writing man. Later.
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
This is truly an awesome poem, I have felt like that a few times, and had similar revelations, but I could never capture it on paper like you do. Keep up the awesome work
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A former member wrote:
wow! you captured this feeling just as bold and clear as a camera! good read poet :)
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On Sunday, March 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
left me breathless this one...the last 5 lines defined really well the whole poem...great job...!