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Destination...UNKNOWN
By xserratedsoulx
From where I come, I cannot tell,
As Misery Cannot Dispel
It’s Dark and Dreary Depths.
Where I am I cannot Know
For the Ancient Ash Prevails to blow
So much that I am Blind.
But Tomorrow’s Path I Seek to Roam
Is Sure to Lead me Safely Home
And That is All that Matters.
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Copyright 2005 xserratedsoulx
Published on Wednesday, August 3, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Destination...UNKNOWN"
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On Thursday, August 24, 2006, swing_the_hammer
(49)
wrote:
i like the feeling this piece has... it seems as though you have accepted what is to come, knowing things have a tendency to work themselves through. good write. -swing
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2006, Fading_Smile
(29) wrote:
thank you for the comment, i appreciate criticism as well as praise, so thank you, and this piece, quite witty, very cool. ~Blake~
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
A very philisophical poem that I must ponder...excellent
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A former member wrote:
cool poem i like it
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On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
I like the fact that you can push your feelings onto the reader using simple lines but strong words. . in particular I like the hope you express in the last stanza. nice work on this.
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A former member wrote:
Very clear, nice write.
I Appreciate finding works like yours. Keep it Up
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On Monday, August 29, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
Your writing is simplistic, yet you get your message across clearly. That is something to be proud of. Another fine write. ~b
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