I'm Sorry
By tormentedsoul666
I'm sorry that I hurt you,
Sorry I made you cry.
but you didn't have to play with me,
You didn't have to lie.
I stayed up late last night,
Carving into my arm.
I was talking on the phone,
They told me not to cause me harm.
But I couldn't help myself,
I needed to let it out.
I sat in my room and cried,
Because its you i cannot be without.
I'm not saying that I love you,
I just hold you very dear.
Lately out of confusion,
I feel sad when you are near.
I wanted to be your girlfriend,
But you went and messed with my mind.
Though I don't think you meant it,
Any care was hard to find.
I've lost myself once more,
I lost it to the pain.
I just wanted you to know,
I can never love you again.
I'm sorry.
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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Comments on "I'm Sorry"
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A former member wrote:
very emo, but i guess thats how some people are. Good write.
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
great write... cutting poetry usually turns me right off, but something about this write held me and kept me captivated. ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thanks...yeah about the cutting i'm trying to quit its a very bad habit of mine...thanks for commenting
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(200) wrote:
*enjoyed the read*..... it was nice, i like the flow of it.... just make sure you keep up the good work!
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank yous i love your poetry more though
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
the core of this was breathtaking. It seemed so real. Not like so many, in which, the words seem so...boastfull. -kitty
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
it is real i wrote it to a guy who wanted me to be his girlfriend but he screwed it upo and i told him no...thanks for commenting!!
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
oh yeah and all of the events are real i did it all