Broken

By tormentedsoul666

Don't get me wrong,
I'm happy for you.
I just want you to know,
I would've stayed with you right through.
I want you to be happy,
Though it tears at my heart.
I wanted to be with you,
But you wanted us apart.
i don't hate you,
But you screwed with my head.
Now, quite often,
I just wanna be dead.
I hate the feelings,
That are coming from my soul.
Without you here,
I no longer feel whole.
But I must move on,
It seems you already have.
You never really loved me,
I just wish you could have.
you told me before,
That my attempts were in vain.
But now don't know,
My only feeling is pain.
But now I am broken,
Destroyed once more.
My only message is,
I can suffer no more.
GOODBYE.

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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Published on Wednesday, April 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    nice write.

  • tormentedsoul666 On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thank you so much!

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Wow, this is wonderful!

  • tormentedsoul666 On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thanks much

  • etarnally damnd On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, etarnally damnd (61)By person wrote:

    i like it i have felt the same thing and know how it feels though it seems every one does i really have good write-michael

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thanks finally another person whose been through it! thankies again for commenting

  • PoeticMindBlow On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, PoeticMindBlow (22)By person wrote:

    awwwh - good work.

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thank you

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