Broken
By tormentedsoul666
Don't get me wrong,
I'm happy for you.
I just want you to know,
I would've stayed with you right through.
I want you to be happy,
Though it tears at my heart.
I wanted to be with you,
But you wanted us apart.
i don't hate you,
But you screwed with my head.
Now, quite often,
I just wanna be dead.
I hate the feelings,
That are coming from my soul.
Without you here,
I no longer feel whole.
But I must move on,
It seems you already have.
You never really loved me,
I just wish you could have.
you told me before,
That my attempts were in vain.
But now don't know,
My only feeling is pain.
But now I am broken,
Destroyed once more.
My only message is,
I can suffer no more.
GOODBYE.
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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
nice write.
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you so much!
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow, this is wonderful!
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thanks much
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
i like it i have felt the same thing and know how it feels though it seems every one does i really have good write-michael
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thanks finally another person whose been through it! thankies again for commenting
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, PoeticMindBlow
(22) wrote:
awwwh - good work.
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you