[xXx]Dance in Silence[xXx]

By murder_in_clubland

Nail polish cracked

A broken face to frame

barbwire teeth

Cut me open in shame

Lightbulbs all out of shine

And I dance alone

In the darkness

Falling through a hole

[sweet silence]

Im screaming,despretly

Pleading for you to rescue me

Save me from the hole

In which im drowning

Stainless steel scars

upon a faded wrist

Still dancing in Silence...

upon the broken glass,

[dance with me]

Let this be the end.




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Copyright 2005 Schiz0phrenic_Jesus
Published on Thursday, April 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The start reminds me of eyes being the windows to the soul, and those windows being cracked or smashed and the world becoming distorted. This is great writing and just the kind of thing I like.

  • A former member wrote: Great poem!

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    "Stainless steel scars upon a faded wrist" worded beautifully...*hugs* how goes it Alley?

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 7, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Meh. living still..unfortunatly...ah well. life goes. and you?!

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    pritty much the fucking same...*sigh*

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 7, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Ouch.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    yea, you know it! obviously

  • murder_in_clubland On Friday, April 8, 2005, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    Lmao...yes yes I Do...

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write!

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