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Battleground of the Mind
By DarkReality
Whispered thoughts
Surreal surroundings
Bitter crying in the night
Standing up to help the fallen
Known world spins, then fades to black
Whimpering, as of a child
Bleeds through sound like liquid pain
Fallen comrades, bleak depression
Dying embers, burning flames
The war for all
The lost child's sanity
Is being fought on dying ground
Always the mouths of truth and innocence
Are the first ones to be bound
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Copyright 2005 DarkReality
Published on Thursday, March 31, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Battleground of the Mind"
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A former member wrote:
strong write.. again dark, but I like it.. I dunno why but all your work has a specifiic feel to me.. Like I'm bebing transported to another world while I read it...
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A former member wrote:
*being
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310)
wrote:
wow..i agree w/ every1 below me! :) -Kel
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A former member wrote:
Powerful use of rhyme within the last 3 lines. Very kairotic. Great job.
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A former member wrote:
wonderful expression...this was great.
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On Thursday, March 31, 2005, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
war...a tragic, melancholy subject..nice write
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