All In Vain
By tormentedsoul666
She sits and she waits,
Waits for you to come home.
Everynight she's disappointed,
When you leave her alone.
She sits at the window,
Watches the storm ahead.
And then she wonders,
Maybe you're not dead.
And this she prays for,
Every single night.
And when she wakes up,
She hopes to see your light.
But then she wonders,
What if it's not true.
She frightened by the thought,
Of never being with you.
So then she goes out to the bridge,
To make her wish come true.
She leaps off the bridge,
She did it just for you.
And as she is falling,
She prays with all her heart.
She prays to her god,
"Never let us be apart".
It turns out that she,
Did it all in vain.
She left this world,
Never to love again.
This is the story,
Of a love so true.
But then this happened,
All because of you!
Comments on "All In Vain"
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A former member wrote:
Wow, talk about the ultimate dedication. In some ways women can fall in this trap. Maybe not literally jumping off a bridge, but nearing the end of their life realizing they spent it waiting. Waiting for someone that was never emotionally there.
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On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Berry Fantastic
(28) wrote:
the ending's kind of corny, but otherwise i really liked this.
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A former member wrote:
sad, beautiful
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you!!
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A former member wrote:
ooo i like this it has a lot of power behind it!!! Bravo! very good job!
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On Wednesday, May 4, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
oh thank you so much!!!
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On Sunday, March 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you it's modeled i after my first attempt at suicide
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(200) wrote:
love the lyrics/poem, dont like the suicide fact....would hate to have to see a great poet fade a way.......i liked it...~saint~
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
aww so sweet *hugs you* don't worry i am not very suidal lately anymore
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On Sunday, March 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
i like this..very cold