All In Vain

By tormentedsoul666

She sits and she waits,
Waits for you to come home.
Everynight she's disappointed,
When you leave her alone.
She sits at the window,
Watches the storm ahead.
And then she wonders,
Maybe you're not dead.
And this she prays for,
Every single night.
And when she wakes up,
She hopes to see your light.
But then she wonders,
What if it's not true.
She frightened by the thought,
Of never being with you.
So then she goes out to the bridge,
To make her wish come true.
She leaps off the bridge,
She did it just for you.
And as she is falling,
She prays with all her heart.
She prays to her god,
"Never let us be apart".
It turns out that she,
Did it all in vain.
She left this world,
Never to love again.
This is the story,
Of a love so true.
But then this happened,
All because of you!

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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Published on Sunday, March 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Lyrics"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow, talk about the ultimate dedication. In some ways women can fall in this trap. Maybe not literally jumping off a bridge, but nearing the end of their life realizing they spent it waiting. Waiting for someone that was never emotionally there.

  • Berry Fantastic On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Berry Fantastic (28)By person wrote:

    the ending's kind of corny, but otherwise i really liked this.

  • A former member wrote: sad, beautiful

  • tormentedsoul666 On Thursday, May 26, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thank you!!

  • A former member wrote: ooo i like this it has a lot of power behind it!!! Bravo! very good job!

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, May 4, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    oh thank you so much!!!

  • tormentedsoul666 On Sunday, March 27, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thank you it's modeled i after my first attempt at suicide

  • Saint_Reaper On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Saint_Reaper (200)By person wrote:

    love the lyrics/poem, dont like the suicide fact....would hate to have to see a great poet fade a way.......i liked it...~saint~

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    aww so sweet *hugs you* don't worry i am not very suidal lately anymore

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, March 27, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    i like this..very cold

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