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[x]I can feel it [you're hollow too][x]
By murder_in_clubland
Your eyes bore into me
like a tattoo feasting upon broken flesh
soaking up your pigment
As our souls begin to mesh
heartbroken,lifes taken
somethings wrong...
everyones gone...
and Im alone
Never felt so alone.
you stabbed me once before
Why cant you stab me again?
slash me with a needle.
[I have lost my head]
My mind is racing,pacing,tracing
your body has fallen so numb
but this is something i cant deal with
I think I might have died
But once again I become hollow
another emotion
to let go of...
and let go of again
Yet I can feel your hollow...
you wont admit it yet.
I thought you knew yourself
better than I did
but I guess Iwas wrong again
i know you better than you think
because i know your hollow..
hollow just like me!
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Copyright 2005 so fucking hollow
Published on Thursday, March 10, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "[x]I can feel it [you're hollow too][x]"
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A former member wrote:
wow much enjoyed, i love the last few lines
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, AniDayz
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wrote:
hrmmm...intensity again...such well placed and vocalized emotion...you fucking have talent, a powerful way in which you get the emotion across so fucking wonderfully.
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A former member wrote:
nice write indeed. i have often tried to explore hollowness, and this put's yet more light into that voidal darkness. cool.
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A former member wrote:
wow this was really strong and honest i loved it ~~GAP~~
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
"i know you better than you think" great line, becuz I can relate to it, i knew my ex better then anyone on the planet, including himself..but time changes people..
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