You Can't Say I Didn't Try

By Jenni

I wanted to make something beautiful,
so i sat down at the table, and i tried all day.
Only then did i realize only beautiful people can make beautiful things.

... so i might as well quit wasting my time.

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Copyright 2005 Smoke_A_Bowl
Published on Monday, March 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, September 22, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I love this. And you ARE beautiful :)

  • A former member wrote: gosh...u have no idea of how many times i have felt that...in fact i'm feeling this right now...and, this is beautiful..beauty in a pure form..*faves*

  • Angst Queen On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    Its hard for us to find beauty in ourselves. Trust those here though, you are beautiful inside and out

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful thought ... it reminds of this shirt I saw once, Ugly music is for ugly people.

  • sIo On Monday, March 7, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this is sad...beauty lies not in the beautiful but in the willing.

  • AniDayz On Monday, March 7, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    ps. i completely DISagree w/ mm as well..it wasnt till now that i scrolled down to read that comment.

  • AniDayz On Monday, March 7, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    um i think that beautiful things are all i the name of PERCEPTION...honey...if only beautiful people can make beautiful things...i think we all be fucked...

  • Linwe On Monday, March 7, 2005, Linwe (25)By person wrote:

    I'm waiting for your next beautiful writing.. Although you had better ones than this one... but you know that and you wrote those yourself...

  • The Crimson Queen On Monday, March 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    thats a horrible thing to say about yourself..

  • BleedSilver On Monday, March 7, 2005, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    This is a beautiful idea, and I strongly disagree with M_M, as I know you better than that. Maybe people shouldn't open their mouths until they understand more of the situation...-nods-

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