suite

By shortandpretentious

dont call me into your palace offering
saccharine white walls sunshine
& a tour of your soundless body sans
bells whistles lamentations
of yesterday true i need some silence
but not of this kind awkward
soon broken by the slam
of a door a cry of victory

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Copyright 2005 shortandpretentious
Published on Thursday, February 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 9, 2011, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Money definitely can't buy everything.

  • A former member wrote: You expressed true emotion. I can relate in my own ways. ][ ][

  • DowngradeBeauty On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, DowngradeBeauty (29)By person wrote:

    This seems to be a miss of something, almost unfinished. However, your use of words paints a beautiful image. Is there more to this?

  • A former member wrote: I so love and admire your style this poem strikes like lightning in an ocean of emotions I feel lately

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