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for denise, the artist
By shortandpretentious
you create
me from nothing really blank canvas
like magic ink flows with time
this drawing is all wrong though
its filled with misconceptions
you believe the world is meant
to break our hearts but really
our sadness means nothing
not while you're here
to protect
this is what you thought the first time
we met eyes smiled
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Copyright 2005 shortandpretentious
Published on Wednesday, February 2, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal
(3016)
wrote:
So much meaning packed into this urn-shaped piece on a platform. And that final line is a brilliant gut puncher.
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
This is so awesome, filled with tenderness and imagery. Well done.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Flowed elegantly. Drew me in, I wanted more.
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
short and to the point. loved it. great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i love your style. This is another piece of excellence from you; gentle and thoughtful with real, clear, understated yet so perfectly stated structure and form. Wonderful.
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On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
wonderful little write...~b
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A former member wrote:
really pretty...........
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On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
if life could only be that easy....great write..its filled with emotion and i loved it! ~AoD
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