Sucked away

By empty_love

To what is this life that will soon grow cold
in this world of hatred and woe
Dark worries whirl into one blur
that has no visible end
Clouds of cries crash in waves
on to the solid black walls of doom
Deaths and horror fill the unwashed air
while all is sufficated by sorrow
This night has no visible end
for the sun shall shine no more
Seeled eyes are no saintuary
Lords will have no power
Chiaos surrounds each corner
stalking everyone like prey
until the life of all is
sucked away

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Copyright 2005 empty_love
Published on Tuesday, February 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: you have good taste in writing and i like the way you described worries as a blur. good work!

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    lovely perspective...well written..and creatively done..~AoD

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