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repercussions of last night
By shortandpretentious
& the smile i recieved from you
led me to believe it would all
be alright, this momentary distance,
spring is not so far away.
i wish i still had the warmth
of your voice
in a bottle under my pillow
for nights like these when i saunter home
to empty rooms with flickering lights
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Copyright 2005 shortandpretentious
Published on Saturday, January 29, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal
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wrote:
You never disappoint no matter what order I read your works. The sign of a fabulous poet making me wonder what your writing is currently like today.
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On Sunday, January 30, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
fantastically written...true brilliance...well done
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful descriptions and flows so nicely.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
amazing....i dont know what else to say, i'm speechless...this was all too good! ~AoD
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
'i wish i still had the warmth of your voice in a bottle under my pillow...'~that line hit me in the face. *greatwrite*
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
This was simply lovely wonderful expression you really captured the emotion in words -kitty
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
you have so much skill at just,,,nailing, the expression and feeling of what you wish to create, nailing it to our hearts
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