Again, I Feel, Again

By maddin foxxxy

He stands behind a cloud of smoke
I crave to see him clearly
He knows I do . .

With a look he paralyzes the time
and the hour freezes at nine
In my mind all I want to do is to take him in my pocket
and make him mine
I know he wants that too . .

There are no stars on a black sky
but I can see them all shine
something in the moment . .
the world it seemed alright
something in the instant
created by some master plan

a brush of his arm
is a rush that arrives just as calm
There is no ocean ahead
but I can taste the sea inside my head
He wants to hold my hand
at least he seems to want to . .

Just like a boy and a girl
playing with their toys
running into something not even God would know . .
I never know
and I don't think he knows
where we're headed to ..
all I know is that it's 11pm in my clock
there is no sand
but we appear to be stuck ..
Our feet won't seem to move
our breath seems out of air
I kiss him on the cheek and
he does the same

We stand behind a cloud of fog
a smile of his can make you feel your ground just rocked
I know this is just enough for me tonight
enough to forgive the world
i thought left me behind

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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Saturday, November 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Well, this is why I come to this site. Poetry like this. This is paints a description of something I haven't been able to put into words. Simply gorgeous.

  • A former member wrote: This is... hold on lemme find a word for it... INCREDIBLE.Your ability to tell a story rivals nevermore. Such vivid smells. Such understanding, even though brief, of the misunderstood. Timely for sure, and collective through the days.

  • A Broken Soul On Saturday, November 20, 2004, A Broken Soul (81)By person wrote:

    it reminds me of lovers meeting for the first time... reminds me of one of my relationships... very lovely and beautiful! ^Autumn^

  • A former member wrote: Ahh...this exploded in my head...what a lovely combustion...I thank you for this...your writes always evoke such a beautiful feeling in me.

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