By Soulfire

You're a fucking pimp, a player, a jerk
I'll stalk you like night, in the shadows I lurk
I'll beat you dead, I'll kick your ass
I'll chop up your body and cut you with glass
One, two, maybe three body parts I'll keep
Just so I can watch the blood drip and seep
Seep and soak to the firey depths of hell
This dark secret, I'll never tell
I'll crush you with boards, I'll smash you with beams
I'll listen to your cries, your moans, and screams
Now I am a suspect, they think I will lie
But these charges I won't deny
It is worth life in jail
So untill we meet again.....see you in hell

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Copyright 2004 Soulfire
Published on Tuesday, November 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Miztaken4beauty On Friday, April 9, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (180)By person wrote:

    Felt this before. Love it.

  • mysterylove On Sunday, August 20, 2006, mysterylove (101)By person wrote:

    i so love this!

  • Broken_Wings12 On Thursday, March 9, 2006, Broken_Wings12 (5)By person wrote:

    I really liked this one. Ive definetely felt this before.

  • A former member wrote: Thank you for liking my poem! hee. I really like this one, the last lines are great, they really got me.

  • A former member wrote: i was kind of wondering where this was going but i liked the wau you wound it down! good peice!

  • Lotophagi On Friday, January 21, 2005, Lotophagi (335)By person wrote:

    wow, that's an unreserved stream of rage..... powerful stuff.... I hope it exorcised some of the anger within you. Nice write. Thank you.

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, SilentStalker (1068)By person wrote:

    ...unrefined rage can be beautiful...but sometimes it's fun just to go vrazy and do it for the thrill...don't mind me, I'm partially insane... -Darun Scholar

  • Atalanta On Tuesday, November 16, 2004, Atalanta (38)By person wrote:

    Rage would seem to be an apropriate title. Woa, this is very well written. I love it!~Atalanta

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